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Codex redux's avatar

D'you want any minor editing notes? Minor stuff like a missed antecedent or an infelicitous word choice?

When I'm reading for fun I do not notice anything more useful.

And I do not wish to offend.

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Rich Whitten's avatar

Looking forward to it!

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KC's avatar

Very fun scene. What a circus!

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Tom Lopez's avatar

This is a timely reminder of the atrocious idiocy we are all facing in our professional and private lives. Thank you Sir!

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Hans G. Schantz's avatar

Thanks for the feedback.

This concludes Act 1.

The next episode, "You May Be Seated," kicks off Act 2 with a look at the media circus surrounding the trial.

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Jim Healy's avatar

looking forward to the media circus next week

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R. H. Snow's avatar

The whole circus analogy is so incredibly fitting right now! Keep 'em coming!! woo

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Jack Gardner's avatar

Enjoy the episode titles. A real circus brewing. Or a real battle.

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