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D'you want any minor editing notes? Minor stuff like a missed antecedent or an infelicitous word choice?

When I'm reading for fun I do not notice anything more useful.

And I do not wish to offend.

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Looking forward to it!

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Very fun scene. What a circus!

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This is a timely reminder of the atrocious idiocy we are all facing in our professional and private lives. Thank you Sir!

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Thanks for the feedback.

This concludes Act 1.

The next episode, "You May Be Seated," kicks off Act 2 with a look at the media circus surrounding the trial.

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looking forward to the media circus next week

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The whole circus analogy is so incredibly fitting right now! Keep 'em coming!! woo

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Enjoy the episode titles. A real circus brewing. Or a real battle.

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