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Back Porch Writer's avatar

Love the tension. Can he really trust the Senator? 🤔

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Jim Healy's avatar

I can understand the concern, on the other hand it would be nice to know that not everyone sent to fight the swamp monsters becomes one.

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Hans G. Schantz's avatar

Kudos to the Aetherczarina who pointed out that I didn't give Senator Travis a good close to his character arc. I worked on him a bit, with the result that he gets the final word in the novel, and he manages to close out what I think is a satisfying character arc.

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